Final edit of case analysis

Read the original case and first draft analysis and two edit versions. Come up with new ideas and comments. Editing are needed no more than 200 words, the appropriate point and analysis and instruction appliance matter the most.

Will dispute the work without understanding the case or without adding convincing edits and comments. 

Due in 5 hours, submit the answer before 6pm today New York Time. Will ignore all answers after 6pm today and dispute the downpayment.